Your voice
is an image now,
stamped -
quite beguiling.
My
eyes burn with ideas,
and I'm stuck
in
time flowing so fast
it deranges.
I see what's
abandoned, what affliction is avoided,
and I'm contemplating the wisdom in matching all you're cap-
able of. Deserting, too, the
the towering space where once we stayed.
Did we leave
anything at
all
behind? After rumors of ruins,
and suggestions of deaths, I am fearful of venturing back...
though
the cries of passage
echo earthward,
treasure
telling, somehow. There is
a choice in this,
but remembrance falters, and your scarcity gives you away.
Still,
I dig through, clambering up, not sure what I'll find or
where I'll end
up.
I am
filtering through the vanished and
unreturned,
pushing
past phantoms, and I am taut of tongue close to
the precipice
where our love
hangs in balance.
Write at the Merge
Marvelous work- such an evocative word-painting. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Thomas.
DeleteI loved this too-and that last line is stunning! Very beautifully written!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Valerie. I, actually, wan't sure about that last line, so I'm glad to hear it was a good choice.
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful. Well done!
ReplyDelete"remembrance falters"
ReplyDeleteThat tiny phrase stuck with me throughout the rest of the reading. It does, doesn't it.